First 20 pages of "Red Plague"

So I've registered the script but while I find myself working elsewhere, I have the "Grindhouse B Horror Movie" script I wrote in 2 weeks for investors I'd like to really get some feedback on. 

In Hollywood, the story is no script is read past 20 pages. The readers who refer scripts to the big wigs do so based on how good the first 20 pages are. With that said, I would love some feedback on my thrown together first twenty pages-- Good or Bad. Just remember IT'S SUPPOSE TO BE CAMPY. Anybody that has time please let me know what you think.

The pictures are my Cartoony sketches of what I want the Monsters to "kind of" look like. I know they need to be much more complex but we haven't gotten that far. We're shooting either Ryan or I's version in Utah in 2010.

Read it here

http://www.roadhousepictures.com/pdfs/bunktown_look.pdf

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